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The Pollen of the Summer

Yellow Jacket spreads,
The pollen of the summer;
To produce new life.

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James Fraser

June 7, 2009 at 3:50 PM

The dreaded wasp, something so small makes people run, like me. Not my favorite insect, great poem Raul>James

Amy Swanson

December 18, 2008 at 5:17 PM

Love this haiku! I can almost see him buzzing from flower to flower! I really liked your ending with the thought of new life. God bless, Amy :)

Daniel Neal

November 24, 2008 at 3:15 PM

Oh, thanks for the welcome comments.

Daniel Neal

November 24, 2008 at 3:14 PM

Nice haiku, my favorite form.

Elizabeth Neal

November 20, 2008 at 9:52 AM

Thank you for the comments on my poems. It meant a lot to me. Love Elizabeth

Elizabeth Neal

November 19, 2008 at 1:17 PM

wow, this is nice makes me want summer to come back

Juliane Thomas

November 19, 2008 at 8:10 AM

I love haiku, and this one is very nice. I'm afraid of yellow jackets, having been stung by them, but they do play an important role in nature!

Ann Anderson

November 19, 2008 at 3:31 AM

Hi Raul, Michael Torres led me to your work, this is really nice, I felt the warm sun,lord knows could do with some, all the very best Ann.

Brian Strand

November 18, 2008 at 2:20 AM

Nice oneb Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

November 17, 2008 at 11:49 AM

What an uplifting view. Each creature has its purpose. This poem is a nice reminder of that. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen