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The Pollen of the Summer

Yellow Jacket spreads, The pollen of the summer; To produce new life.

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James Fraser

Date: 6/7/2009 3:50:00 PM

The dreaded wasp, something so small makes people run, like me. Not my favorite insect, great poem Raul>James

Amy Swanson

Date: 12/18/2008 5:17:00 PM

Love this haiku! I can almost see him buzzing from flower to flower! I really liked your ending with the thought of new life. God bless, Amy :)

Daniel Neal

Date: 11/24/2008 3:15:00 PM

Oh, thanks for the welcome comments.

Daniel Neal

Date: 11/24/2008 3:14:00 PM

Nice haiku, my favorite form.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 11/20/2008 9:52:00 AM

Thank you for the comments on my poems. It meant a lot to me. Love Elizabeth

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 11/19/2008 1:17:00 PM

wow, this is nice makes me want summer to come back

Juliane Thomas

Date: 11/19/2008 8:10:00 AM

I love haiku, and this one is very nice. I'm afraid of yellow jackets, having been stung by them, but they do play an important role in nature!

Ann Anderson

Date: 11/19/2008 3:31:00 AM

Hi Raul, Michael Torres led me to your work, this is really nice, I felt the warm sun,lord knows could do with some, all the very best Ann.

Brian Strand

Date: 11/18/2008 2:20:00 AM

Nice oneb Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 11/17/2008 11:49:00 AM

What an uplifting view. Each creature has its purpose. This poem is a nice reminder of that. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/17/2008 7:06:00 AM

Yes...we do have yellow jackets in the summer....and more each year it seems! Just don't get stung! :) ~ Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/17/2008 3:00:00 AM

Nice to read something of summer, these chully days. :) The circle of life is miraculous! Love Kristin

Michael Torres

Date: 11/16/2008 11:51:00 PM

I can see this image you portrayed so vivdly. Excellent wrtie Raul. Michael Torres