The Polite Nature At Thimpu
I walked all day excitedly in the wonderfully cool hillside
At Thimpu, the capital and a lovely town of Bhutan’s pride
At the peaks the wind and mist in a quiet seek and hide
And the venerable hills and woods standing quite satisfied
There on your face I observed timeless tranquility vivified
Revealing the feeling of infinity now untied and then tied
In the sylvan ease of nature at mountainous countryside
Mysterious mist whispered at the mesmerizing hill-divide
At the hill top glorious Buddha seated on a lotus wide
Incarnation of compassion gold-gilded and dignified
While at the ancient signs in a monastery mountainside
Surprisingly gushing forth a fountain dancingly arrived
I stared with an amazement but didn’t know the hillside
Had in an intense moment entered my heart deep inside
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May 13, 2016
Submission for Monorhyme – Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton// Using the words: Tranquility – Sylvan – Venerable – Ancient - Mysterious
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