The Poison I Crave

I live in this continuum,
Where I sit, I scroll, I rot.
This blissful poison hypnotizes me in,
An artifice far deadlier than I thought.

It promises me sweet lies,
Feeding on the pith of my mind.
I grow my own nicotine,
A toxin that turns me blind.

Stronger than any drug it seems,
It drags me out of reality.
I escape to the realms of fractured dreams,
Only to suffer their calamity.

I live in this continuum,
Where my soul resigns to the comfort I crave.
In this abyss I dwell,
I have learned to dig up my own grave.

23/01/25

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Date: 1/26/2025 5:56:00 PM
Very creative and thought provoking, we all need time as this to reflect on distractions in life, great to see you writing about it : )
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/27/2025 4:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, yes truly...glad you stopped by :)
Date: 1/24/2025 1:00:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write. I have seen a few people die from the years of nicotine. Only one could stop it. What an ending you have here. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/26/2025 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Paula! yes i have heard too... hopefully i overcome my addiction to screens...have a great day! :)
Date: 1/24/2025 11:12:00 AM
A smoker. I can imagine how difficult it would be to stop. My sister can't lose weight and has been obese all her life. I know people who threw everything away for alcohol or gambling. I hope you can overcome your own brand of poison. I learned to control my eating by counting calories. My TV watching. That's a different story!!
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/26/2025 7:28:00 AM
Oh that must be tough! Yes addictions are really terrible. oh that's great, lol...thank you so much and glad you stopped by!
Date: 1/24/2025 9:55:00 AM
Good rhythm, flow and rhymes. I enjoyed reading. Sometimes I wonder if all of us are not wasting our brain on computer, cell phones, and tv. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/26/2025 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara...yes they are highly addictive and take away a lot of time! And as a teen myself its just so difficult to overcome this addiction...glad you stopped by :)
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