The Point Contest

I'm trying to lose weight, but whats the point in it?
I just can't seem to get this and be fit.
Motivation will come at some point I think.
But my waist is doing the opposite of shrink.

My doctor makes a good point in having a diet.
But his large body tells me he has never tried it.
I see my efforts being trivial  and pointless.
So what if I don't have a girl friend to kiss.

You don't know me, maybe this Saturday I have a hot date.
I don't, but that's due to you people pointing out my weight. 
I have so many people who pointed out this next flaw, 
that they're suppose to point up, so I should invest in a bra.  

This isn't an obstacle, its a mountain to climb,
but I have to get up and try at some point in time.
I am trying to get back to the point I was at years ago,
even when you're not at point blank, my love handles still show.

Yes I shop at the big and tall store, 
but don't make it your point to stare at me and take a tour. 
I wish they would see my point of view and be fair.
My point is, I am who I am, and your opinion, I just don't care.
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Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:25 AM
Congrats Chris on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
Calhoun Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 12:32 PM
Hi Chris - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
Taylor Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congrats, Chris. Well deserved. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Congrats Chris on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry ... u sure made the point with your awesome lines.... enjoy your top ten victory with luv..
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Chris
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest, Chris! Always, Annalise
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your win Chris in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:17 PM
you have a startling point here, chris... beautiful rant about being who you are, punds and all.. best winning wishes in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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