The Point

I can't tell the point
where I stop and you begin
the two intertwine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Haven't seen you post in forever
A   Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 1:46 PM
good one..pd
Hill Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 10:25 AM
well done...TAH
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 6:33 PM
very creative write , J.B.
Gorelick Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Very nice..I think it might qualify as a senryu...BG
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