The Poet and the Doctor

The doctor and the poet became friends late in life--
as old men they looked over the past in similar ways,
wishing their youth had never ended, their work continued,
their lives once again resplendent and filled with promise
as the one healed the body and the other the soul....

But Time is always the master of Life till Death frees both,
and so the doctor sent his patients away and the poet
lost his words, the words he tried to heal with, words
that sang and danced and played like carefree children....

The poet told his friend, the doctor, how he found his soul
whilst in the blackest part of hell, utterly alone, in pain 
far beyond any pain the doctor ever treated, a soul
he had forgotten and found when he threw his life away.

The doctor listened to his friend, the poet, but could not,
or perhaps just would not believe-- he just could not see
existence beyond mortality, nor purpose beyond chance.
The doctor was so wise as to be foolish, thought the poet,
and I, so foolish as to be wise? he wondered to himself...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/9/2022 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations, again!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/9/2022 9:02:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/8/2022 9:51:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, poetically celebrating "International Friendship Day." God bless you.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/9/2022 9:03:00 AM
Gracias Beata, y vaya con Dios siempre tambien!
Date: 2/17/2022 5:29:00 AM
Two interesting persons. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/19/2022 10:41:00 AM
Thank you so much--I hope all is well.
Date: 11/14/2021 6:56:00 PM
Trapped in lower mind, ego grips us in its bind. No wonder, left & right brain don’t agree, congrats on your win, Carber
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/16/2021 9:10:00 AM
Thank you, Seeker
Date: 11/14/2021 5:50:00 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/14/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Beata!
Date: 3/30/2021 10:55:00 AM
LJ, back with congratulations on this wonderful poem that tells both sides of life's story through the eyes of science and art. I enjoyed this the first time I read it and loved it all over again. Sending you congratulations and a high five!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/30/2021 7:46:00 PM
Thanks again Sam!
Date: 2/21/2020 4:22:00 PM
LJ, you have so skillfully intertwined both sides of the question about the meaning of life through the scientist and the poet in a very engaging narrative piece! Really nice! Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/22/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Sam
Date: 7/4/2019 6:09:00 PM
Hello L.J. Carber, I have enjoyed this poem. Congratulations on your win. have a nice evening my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/5/2019 11:32:00 AM
Thank you Darlene
Date: 11/12/2018 9:33:00 AM
I've read a few of yours. Very contemplative. Very cool. Thanks for your kind comments on A British Soldier in Zululand.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/13/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Jon-- and may I say, you bring something out of the ordinary to Soup-- most welcome (and I'm guessing you're British?)
Date: 11/5/2018 12:36:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, LJ - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/5/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thank you my old friend! And may God keep you and all poets who seek Him--
Date: 10/28/2018 5:32:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, LJ. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/29/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Line-- appreciated as always!
Date: 10/28/2018 11:48:00 AM
the last line, wonderful poem, Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/28/2018 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, LL, I feel honored!
Date: 10/22/2018 4:54:00 PM
Love your last stanza. Great poem. Congrats on your top win, LJ.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/23/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Line-- I really am always in a quandary as to whether I'm wise or a big dummy!
Date: 10/18/2018 7:11:00 PM
Nicely done, LJ - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/19/2018 10:09:00 AM
Gracias, my amigo-- much appreciated!
Date: 10/15/2018 8:06:00 AM
A great combination of two fields. Philosophical and great poem. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/19/2018 10:09:00 AM
Thank you-- it is very much appreciated!
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