The Poet and the Doctor

The doctor and the poet became friends late in life--
as old men they looked over the past in similar ways,
wishing their youth had never ended, their work continued,
their lives once again resplendent and filled with promise
as the one healed the body and the other the soul....

But Time is always the master of Life till Death frees both,
and so the doctor sent his patients away and the poet
lost his words, the words he tried to heal with, words
that sang and danced and played like carefree children....

The poet told his friend, the doctor, how he found his soul
whilst in the blackest part of hell, utterly alone, in pain 
far beyond any pain the doctor ever treated, a soul
he had forgotten and found when he threw his life away.

The doctor listened to his friend, the poet, but could not,
or perhaps just would not believe-- he just could not see
existence beyond mortality, nor purpose beyond chance.
The doctor was so wise as to be foolish, thought the poet,
and I, so foolish as to be wise? he wondered to himself...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Alex Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations, again!
Carber Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Thank you!
Agustin Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 9:51 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, poetically celebrating "International Friendship Day." God bless you.
Carber Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 9:03 AM
Gracias Beata, y vaya con Dios siempre tambien!
Alex Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 5:29 AM
Two interesting persons. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Thank you so much--I hope all is well.
Seeker Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 6:56 PM
Trapped in lower mind, ego grips us in its bind. No wonder, left & right brain don’t agree, congrats on your win, Carber
Carber Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you, Seeker
Agustin Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 5:50 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Carber Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Thanks Beata!
Kauffman Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 10:55 AM
LJ, back with congratulations on this wonderful poem that tells both sides of life's story through the eyes of science and art. I enjoyed this the first time I read it and loved it all over again. Sending you congratulations and a high five!
Carber Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 7:46 PM
Thanks again Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 4:22 PM
LJ, you have so skillfully intertwined both sides of the question about the meaning of life through the scientist and the poet in a very engaging narrative piece! Really nice! Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thanks Sam
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 6:09 PM
Hello L.J. Carber, I have enjoyed this poem. Congratulations on your win. have a nice evening my friend.
Carber Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Thank you Darlene
Gutmacher Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 9:33 AM
I've read a few of yours. Very contemplative. Very cool. Thanks for your kind comments on A British Soldier in Zululand.
Carber Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Thanks Jon-- and may I say, you bring something out of the ordinary to Soup-- most welcome (and I'm guessing you're British?)
Barden Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 12:36 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, LJ - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Carber Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Thank you my old friend! And may God keep you and all poets who seek Him--
Gauthier Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, LJ. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Carber Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Line-- appreciated as always!
Scars Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 11:48 AM
the last line, wonderful poem, Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
Carber Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Thank you, LL, I feel honored!
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Love your last stanza. Great poem. Congrats on your top win, LJ.
Carber Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thank you Line-- I really am always in a quandary as to whether I'm wise or a big dummy!
Barden Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Nicely done, LJ - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-)
Carber Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Gracias, my amigo-- much appreciated!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 8:06 AM
A great combination of two fields. Philosophical and great poem. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
Carber Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Thank you-- it is very much appreciated!
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