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The Poet And His Mistress

Her lustrous skin captures his vision
He gently carves his desire on her
The foreplays of word begins
As she divulges the door to heaven
Bewitched by the color of her moonlight,
he bathes within the salt of her valley
The mystery behind his curtain of words
Is unlocked by his divine mistress
His heart races when she silently meets
the poet of her sensual dreams
As he traces her beauty with his fingertips
Ice melts on her crimson lips
And the foreplays of word begins

Thank you red for sharing pens 
A Collaboration With Red Fiery and  Liam Mc Daid| Year

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/24/2016 2:49:00 PM
very moving
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Date: 5/16/2016 1:59:00 PM
Liam, A great co-write here by you and Red Fiery!! With just the right hint of being racy, but for sure passionate and sensual. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/17/2016 2:23:00 AM
thank you Gary for such a lovely comment!
Date: 5/16/2016 1:31:00 PM
- Lovely and romantic, poems from you Liam & Red - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/17/2016 2:24:00 AM
You are a sweetheart my dear:)
Date: 5/16/2016 11:00:00 AM
A fabulous and passionate collaboration. I love the line "The mystery behind his curtain of words Is unlocked by his divine mistress"
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/17/2016 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Tim for such a lovely comment...:)
Date: 5/16/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Liam for mixing ink with me... This came up so beautifully... Cheers~red
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:24:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Red Fiery.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 5/16/2016 7:23:00 AM
Hot! hot! the foreplays of words begin...what a steamy collaboration :)
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