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Hungry stomach and hungry voice Choice of the capitalists Skin and bone girls and boys Their creature and they rejoice Words and paints latent in their look Contents of a hundred books In those naked socket of their eyes Variety of hunger multiplies They come and they go Flutes of skeleton playing with turmoil Hapless sons of the soil Born with the desire to say no Two handsome young faces In their nation-made ungraces Posters depicting street protest Against the sucker pests Poems in their dormant breasts Lurking in their scorning look Blending with gainless cry Empty hopes in the still false sky ____________________________________ April 9, 2016 For the Images that make you think – Poetry Contest Hosted by: Silent One

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Date: 4/27/2016 9:32:00 PM
Probir, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/16/2016 12:26:00 PM
Congrats Probir for superb win
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/16/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Anand....
Date: 4/16/2016 11:16:00 AM
Such images of sight and the way your words depict them, not only make one think, but also cry, until we are forced to act. Congrats of your deserved win my friend. GBU Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/16/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thanks. Still further better words are required// To condemn how everyday breastful of dreams are slaughtered// How basic smiles are battered// Into wild agression Let him rather bless the hungry abdomen in the pic. Can he, overriding those who are responsible?
Date: 4/16/2016 4:58:00 AM
Magnificent write Probir.. congrats on top podium..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/16/2016 5:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Upma. I am lagging behind in reciprocation...
Date: 4/15/2016 10:37:00 AM
So eloquently and potently expressed the despair. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/15/2016 6:22:00 AM
Excellent Probir. Big congratulations on this powerful poem being awarded first place! A very deserving win for you! #7 :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 7:13:00 AM
Most welcome Connie...
Date: 4/14/2016 9:20:00 PM
Powerful own, Probir! Congrats on your top win :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 4/14/2016 9:01:00 PM
Many congrats on this TOP win!!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 9:31:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 4/14/2016 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 8:28:00 PM
Calurosa bienvenida...
Date: 4/14/2016 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 4/14/2016 6:01:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your 1st place win, Probir !!!!!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 8:09:00 PM
Lots of thanks Eve Eve. You are a great encourager...
Date: 4/14/2016 5:43:00 PM
Great write my friend and congrats on your top spot
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 8:10:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 4/14/2016 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on your top spot in the contest. A most appropriate poem for a very sad photo. Well deserved. Peace my friend:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 8:13:00 PM
Thanks for the evaluation...Peace....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thanks for the evaluation...Peace....
Date: 4/14/2016 5:15:00 PM
Such an amazing poem, Probir. Congratulations on your well-deserved top of the podium win! Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 8:25:00 PM
The credit goes to your photo. Secondly, while writing, both the left and right of the brain got involved..I feel a sense of catharsis now...THANK YOU for providing me with the opportunity Silent....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 4/9/2016 12:12:00 PM
Probir, a wonderful entry for the contest...good luck! :)-luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/10/2016 12:25:00 AM
I am honoured Laura...
Date: 4/9/2016 12:49:00 AM
Wow!!! very profound write, Probir, you have captured and repainted their story. a 7 Hugs dear friend
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/9/2016 2:49:00 AM
Thanks Eve...

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