S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Limerick

The Poem In the Mind-2

The poem in the mind

There is  only  enough space in my mind
For just a poem and there you I find
Can’t think of another thing
My mind singing what you sing
To all else except you I’m rather blind.

I know you are an involved mom of six
And what toll it takes bringing up those chicks
On your spirit and body
Your life was never gaudy
But the essence of such a  gracious mix.

Adorable are your traits which are rare
Attributes, six, are your  children so fair
They are love, care and beauty
Passion, power and frailty
Here’s  the perfect woman beyond compare.


@ 23 feb 13

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Entry for PD's contest on 5 mar 13

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Pandita Sietesantos October 24, 2014 at 11:21 AM Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Pandita

Lucilla Carrillo March 13, 2013 at 8:50 PM This was very nice and I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Ralph Taylor March 7, 2013 at 4:17 PM Congrats, Jag. Excellent piece. Well done. Nice going. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A March 6, 2013 at 9:38 PM JAG, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2013 at 12:23 AM this is so sweet. It sounds like you are doing a tribute for your wife here!! Do you really have six children?? When you said "your" six children , it sounds as if the children do not belong to you, only to her. So I was curious!!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2013 at 8:55 AM You always have enjoyable poems to share, Jag. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Chidozie Uche O. February 23, 2013 at 3:01 AM thanks for sharing that greatly flow of emotion.

Ale A A February 23, 2013 at 2:51 AM What beautiful words of loving someone. Very nice read.