The Poem

This poem I'm writing just wants to eat,
And it's getting so fat I can't see its feet.
The more words I feed it the more it wants,
And it's even eyeing my croissants.
I had thought to send it outside to play,
And hope that it will just go away.
I'll close the blinds so it can't see in,
And when it's gone I'll just begin again.
I know, I know, you think me cruel,
But you wouldn't think that if you cleaned the drool.
It's messy and formless and no one would want it,
And I don't either, and that's the short of it.
So I opened the door and it barely squeezed out,
As it shuffled and wobbled and floundered about.
It played outside for as long as it could,
Then stood at the door as I expected it would.
When I didn't open up it just sat and waited,
Not the scenario I had contemplated.
So I'm feeling guilty, and I just can't do it,
I'll just let it in, and try to get back to it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/15/2016 2:11:00 PM
Hi George: I have just discovered your writing. Not sure if you are still around but wanted to say this one is so cute and funny. Best, SuZ
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George Leblanc
Date: 2/16/2016 7:39:00 AM
Yes, SuZ, I'm still around, just haven't written any new poems in a while. I've been concentrating on some articles. I greatly appreciate your kind appraisal of my work. This one is one of my personal favorites. You really got my day off to a good start. Thanks! George
Date: 9/15/2015 8:56:00 PM
Hi George, What an interesting poem you have created here....I really loved reading every line of this poem!-Love Ettie
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:55:00 AM
I love this!! What a fun, clever, unique write! The perfect read for a Monday morning :)
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George Leblanc
Date: 9/14/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thank you, Heather, You're comments are so sweet and genuine. Thanks for the read...George
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