The Plight of My City

In the city's streets
Cars bought with loans-
Second-hand,third-hand models,
Number two cars
Soared in number.
Parkings sprawled into 
The hearts of the roads.
E- rickshaw halt
Blocking the paths.
Women vegetable vendors
Occupy the footpaths.

Traffic police are busy
Qualling quarrels between
Auto rickshaw drivers
And woman vendors.
Police constable lurk
For bribes in the shadows.
The goverment and people
Go their ways often
Ignoring the rules.
A chaotic dance 
For all to see.
This is the plight
Of my city.

(Depended on a local  newspaper in writting this poem)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 3/16/2025 12:23:00 PM
It sounds like your city needs a civil engineer. I'd start with widening streets and putting in a rickshaw lane. Thank you for this peek at India's chaos. When things can't get worse, they get better.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/18/2025 6:31:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/15/2025 9:46:00 AM
You shined a light on your city, the chaos, the government, the quarrels.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/16/2025 3:14:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/14/2025 3:47:00 PM
Gosh. I can't even imagine how it must be where you live. I only see it in movies. But your poem brings it to life here
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/14/2025 10:23:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/14/2025 12:31:00 PM
- Yes, a chaotic dance... without rules, Akham - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/14/2025 10:26:00 PM
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