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The Pledge

I tell you that I love you, but you don’t believe me. I try to hug you, but you don’t like to be touched. Every time to I try to kiss you, you say that you’re sick. I try to be there for you when, you’re feeling down; but you say you want to be alone. Why don’t you embrace my love? “Because when my mom told me she loved me, she beat me every day. She never hugged or kissed me not even once. Please tell me how can I wel- come and embrace love when my own mom didn't love me? Oh by the way I never knew my dad”. “I understand you so much clear- er now. You have been through so much my love. But know this I pledge my love to you until you believe”. 11-26-17 Alexis Y.

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Date: 11/27/2017 11:29:00 AM
Powerful poetry, Alexis! It made me cry, but I got strength from pledge at the end. Heart moving poetry. A fave for sure. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 11/27/2017 8:29:00 AM
What a sad poem Alexis.. I hope you break through to him..
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Date: 11/27/2017 7:12:00 AM
So sad and unfortunately it happens far too often. Nicely penned, Alexis. John
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Date: 11/27/2017 5:50:00 AM
I can't imagine your sadness my friend...no one should experience that...well expressed Alexis...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/26/2017 5:37:00 PM
This so sad and heartbroken. I myself didn't know my father until I was in my early teens. But I was most loved by my mother and family. A touching poem Alexis. Hugs and smiles dear :)
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