The Playful Breeze

The playful Breeze

The heavy scented breeze was caressing 
the canopies of the trees
on its way to the sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Acrich Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 10:58 AM
(:
Blanca Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Mark, I just think your writings are great.
Faulkner Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 11:39 AM
So peaceful and serene-very evocative-
Blanca Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Thank you Michelle. Have a good year.
Blanca Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 11:42 AM
I like how you use prose Michelle. Keep it up.
Horn Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:27 PM
While as a carouso I was singing, Sound in fish had been bringing; Natural talent, And so reliant; Best ever fisherman I am being.
Blanca Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:40 AM
James, like always you are special. Thanks for your response.
Sami Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Heavenly image Carlos!
Blanca Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Thank you Mubarika.
Pandit Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Well captured breeze..a great poem.
Blanca Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Thanks Vijay
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