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unrhymed tercets 

 

We have grown to love has shifted face 
brothers and sisters lost in all that is valued 
under human reality chains shape shifting

Firstly murder has become a tipping point on our scales 
meaningless news edited by wheasels to alter opinions set 
incorrectly twisted falsehoods aired liars speak

Where truth and family based structures are attacked 
good is considered a bad state of belief to be in 
as it does not stand in favour within stones thrown sin

Human error has crept up upon us bringing destruction 
every where it goes it terrorises living souls 
unaddressed mass murders they are living lavish lifestyles

Do we learn anything from past mistakes made 
Looking through the portal of mirrors 
our flesh will perish immortal spirit rises

A field of entanglement forces against justice work around 
the clock clouded visions ticking every minute closer 
one time bomb ready to explode

Now the gates are opening to Hades 
ignorance now is used as some sort of intelligence tool 
Where boundaries have been removed for ugly reasons

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/7/2018 2:12:00 PM
Liam, so much truth in this poem.. “the clock clouded visions ticking every minute closer one time bomb ready to explode” hard hitting truth exposed-:)
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Date: 2/5/2018 5:07:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with faith truth caring.Very heartfelt!This world is a total mess in all,Liam.It breaks my heart to know of all the bad things happening in this world.These are the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray more for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Take very good care!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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