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unrhymed tercets

We have grown to love has shifted face brothers and sisters lost in all that is valued under human reality chains shape shifting Firstly murder has become a tipping point on our scales meaningless news edited by wheasels to alter opinions set incorrectly twisted falsehoods aired liars speak Where truth and family based structures are attacked good is considered a bad state of belief to be in as it does not stand in favour within stones thrown sin Human error has crept up upon us bringing destruction every where it goes it terrorises living souls unaddressed mass murders they are living lavish lifestyles Do we learn anything from past mistakes made Looking through the portal of mirrors our flesh will perish immortal spirit rises A field of entanglement forces against justice work around the clock clouded visions ticking every minute closer one time bomb ready to explode Now the gates are opening to Hades ignorance now is used as some sort of intelligence tool Where boundaries have been removed for ugly reasons

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Donna Loughman

Date: 2/7/2018 2:12:00 PM

Liam, so much truth in this poem.. “the clock clouded visions ticking every minute closer one time bomb ready to explode” hard hitting truth exposed-:)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/5/2018 5:07:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with faith truth caring.Very heartfelt!This world is a total mess in all,Liam.It breaks my heart to know of all the bad things happening in this world.These are the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray more for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Take very good care!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^