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Do you know the place? Beyond the stars where tires fall from trees. Do you know the place? The sky is blue but when it rains all you can see are the clouds. Do you know the place? Where clowns juggle tree branches with balls. Do you know the place? She picks Apple's from trees and eats them before the worms do. There is a story once told about a bird who flew so high in the sky above the trees that he could touch the stars and dive so fast that he went through a tire hole, and landed on a clowns nose. She missed the bird because she was too busy eating her apples with one worm in one apple.

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Date: 11/15/2013 10:17:00 AM
Bridgett, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Brigett Hurley
Date: 12/4/2013 12:40:00 PM
Thank You so much. Happy Holidays.
Date: 11/13/2013 7:38:00 PM
Clever and witty. Like the ending. Welcome.
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Brigett Hurley
Date: 11/14/2013 9:08:00 AM
Thank You Mark, I really do appreciate the comment.
Date: 11/13/2013 3:10:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Brigett ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Brigett Hurley
Date: 11/14/2013 9:09:00 AM
Thank You Anne, wonderful comment and feed back. Have a wonderful day.
Date: 11/12/2013 10:23:00 PM
The story you tell through your poem was refreshing like a child's memory... Hanging from trees and eating up them apples.... Bridgett,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend *Luv~ > LINDA <
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Brigett Hurley
Date: 11/14/2013 9:09:00 AM
Sounds wonderful, LOL, thank you.

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