The Pitch Dark Night Sky

Laying in my bed
There is nothing in my head
The night is growing mysterious
Time is going crawling by
I can see the pitch black sky
It’s silent every where
But I can feel the cool of the night air
I’m listening to the annoying tick tock sound of this wall clock
This still night made me realize, how lonesome we are
Just left in the lurch…In the middle of the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mahur Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Dear KKKKKKiran, this a short but lovely poem having pacifying feels. Thanks an be in touch through poems.
A   Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Hi Kiran, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
Bisht Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Thank you so much, LINDA :)
Mehta Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 5:33 AM
A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, kiran
Bisht Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Thank you, Dr Mehta :)
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March 8, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Kiran, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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March 2, 2014 at 11:24 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Kiran - I choose your first good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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March 2, 2014 at 8:34 AM
Kiran, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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