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The Pit of Hell

the Pit of Hell I had dream a broken thoughts Of strange nightmares darkened my dark Lighted by thick darkness no rules no responsibility no order beautified by darkness melody by wailings Coloured by horrors, horrors you have never never seen In the fragility of my dreams The last of hope is lost there even the dead prefers the grave in the grave is RIP In the pit hell no peace is found and calmness is noised by voices Of wailing, weeping men No corrections there ,no promotion all insignias are melted all ranks ground In the fragility of my dreams all Pride is powdered mixed with the fire to the boil no recommendations ,no respect no reprimands No injury time ,no first half no second half no penalties, no referees, no timing the game keeps on playing, the ball keeps on rolling rolling and never stopping~~~~~~~`~````~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~````~~~~~~~~ No day, no night no air, no breath, yet no death~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ your enemies become your friends no contention only one common goal ;Pains pains pains with hands like darks fangs deepened down the brain emmmmmmmm~~~~~ The greatest mystery; burns but never ashes only strengthens worms feed ease death is sent parking pain is the foundation The cries of wailing men like the roaring of millions of lions Be warned Behold He cometh In His wings of Glory!!! I bubbled out my sleep to remain whole again In the fragility of my dreams 26/4/2020

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Date: 5/27/2020 2:28:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Gideon :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/27/2020 4:09:00 PM
Thanks alot
Date: 5/27/2020 1:45:00 PM
Your words are really powerful to portray faith in fragility. Congratulations on your win Gideon :)
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/27/2020 4:09:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 5/27/2020 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Great work.Liked it.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/27/2020 4:15:00 PM
Gratefully gracious
Date: 5/27/2020 6:34:00 AM
I agree with Line.. powerful imagery... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/27/2020 4:16:00 PM
Am encouraged
Date: 5/20/2020 12:37:00 AM
Powerful imagery, Gideon.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/20/2020 2:43:00 AM
Thanks your
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/20/2020 2:42:00 AM
Thanks

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