The Pit of Hell

the Pit of Hell
I had dream
a broken thoughts
Of strange nightmares
darkened my dark

Lighted by thick darkness
no rules no responsibility no order
beautified by darkness melody by wailings
Coloured by horrors,
horrors you have never never seen

In the fragility of my dreams
The last of hope is lost there 
even the dead prefers the grave
in the grave is RIP
In the pit hell no peace is found
and calmness is noised by voices
Of wailing, weeping men
No corrections there ,no promotion
all insignias are melted all ranks ground

In the fragility of my dreams
all Pride is powdered
mixed with the fire to the boil
no recommendations ,no respect
no reprimands

No injury time ,no first half no second half
no penalties, no referees, no timing
the game keeps on playing, the ball keeps on rolling
rolling and never stopping~~~~~~~`~````~~~~~~~~~
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No day, no night no air, 
no breath, yet no death~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
your enemies become your friends
 no contention only one common goal
;Pains pains pains with hands like darks fangs
deepened down the brain emmmmmmmm~~~~~

The greatest mystery;
 burns but never ashes
only strengthens
worms feed ease
death is sent parking
pain is the foundation

The cries of wailing men
like the roaring of millions
of lions

Be warned 
Behold He cometh
In His wings of Glory!!!
I bubbled out my sleep
to remain whole again
In the fragility of my dreams




26/4/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 2:28 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Gideon :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Idudje Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Thanks alot
Mishra Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Your words are really powerful to portray faith in fragility. Congratulations on your win Gideon :)
Idudje Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Thanks
Deepa Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Great work.Liked it.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa
Idudje Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 4:15 PM
Gratefully gracious
One Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 6:34 AM
I agree with Line.. powerful imagery... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Idudje Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 4:16 PM
Am encouraged
Gauthier Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 12:37 AM
Powerful imagery, Gideon.
Idudje Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 2:43 AM
Thanks your
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May 20, 2020 at 2:42 AM
Thanks
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