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The Pirates Love

Out on the shore he looked away, drawn by the oceans crashing waves; out on the shore her heart it broke, as she watched him stop to smoke. They knew that ties of love would sever, that he would go away forever; ne’er to return to this shore, ne’er to see her, his love, anymore. And so the sloop the pirate boarded, where all his treasure he had hoarded; away he sailed to far new lands, to take from others with his hands. Though he seemed so heartless and cruel, even he had loved a girl; and on a shore so far away, they hanged the pirate there today. She heard the news, her heart it wept, and so she plunged into the depth; her body found broken and maimed, death the choice she had claimed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/5/2010 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Sena. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations Sena on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:05:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Sena. Love,Carol
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:36:00 PM
short simple and sweet . very good JohnH Loving III
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Date: 1/12/2010 1:34:00 PM
Nice Couplet Sena, sad poem and a joy to read >> James
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Date: 1/7/2010 3:04:00 PM
Hi Sena,First of all I want to welcome you to poetry soup! Love your poem, a very emotional poem. Great visual. Sad ending but not all ending are good in life so I appreciate this. I truly enjoyed the drama for it deeply touched a sacred part of my heart. Keep writing and I shall keep reading!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/5/2010 5:13:00 PM
Thankxxx Sena for your kind comments on my poetry tonight and for making me a favorite.. I look forward to reading many more of your selections too ..and don't forget to check out the "contests" page to submit your poetry for competition... I just posted my 522nd poem this morning and its so much fun once u get started its hard to stop... so get your gifted pen going .. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 1/5/2010 4:43:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. may your stay be a long one and may your new year be filled with blessings.. luv.. creativeness.. friendships.. health.. and great poetry like this delight.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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