Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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.Kind of lonely dry and uncomfortable at the top of self...The form of poetry used is an English Sestet..

The Pinnacle

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                                           The pinnacle of selfishness
                                       On top of the great world am I 
                                      Alone here with selfcenteredness
                                      By myself I can eat the whole pie
                                            Alone with television yea
                                       No arguments with me this day

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 10:39 AM I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Sara. Love, Carol

Judy Ball September 8, 2011 at 12:32 PM Sometiimes we all need a little "Me Time". I like this one. God Bless, JB

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr. September 8, 2011 at 11:24 AM Neatly written Sara, the reads are always intresting which I surely enjoy.

Doris Culverhouse September 8, 2011 at 8:45 AM sharp seat at the top....was you on your pinnacle last night? missed you at church.

Elizabeth Wesley September 7, 2011 at 8:09 PM Well, you have to have it your way once in awhile. Go for it girl. Enjoyed this.

Jack Horne September 7, 2011 at 5:09 PM LOL, I know someone like that too...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 7, 2011 at 4:37 PM intriguing thoughts Sara and sublime inspiration too.. selfish is of the ego and ego is a no no in God's creation luv..

John Smith September 7, 2011 at 3:56 PM Well depicted. So, who stole the damn remote? And who ate my pie? I do know someone like that.

Russell Sivey September 7, 2011 at 2:49 PM Nicely written Sara! Enjoyed greatly!!