The Pink Ribbon

1. 

A collapsed lung.....
wires and cotton thread sheets
caress naked flesh....
Hands fragile and frail 
blood trickles down the lip...
a half eaten fruit cup sits by the bedside, 
and a malnourished body slowly rots....


2. 
Flowing black hair swaying in the open breeze
tall and slender, body engulfed in a sea of red silk.....
Eyes beaming turquoise and sapphire
face, smooth to the touch
hands, nimble and delicate....


3. 

A lump on the breast
shivers, chills, and shakes 
yellow phlegm, projected from the throat....
Sedation..... prescription pills, and fatigue
a touch of pneumonia.....


4. 

Air, slithering into a closing throat 
flickering eyes, parched lips, 
and a dry tongue...
frigid steel, pressing against tender flesh
stitches and staples, 
breast and body.... separated...


5. 

Urine on the sheets, blood on the pillow
brain, comatose and body, numb
silence......
spirit and body.... separated....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/2/2016 12:05:00 PM
Oh Antonio the imagery is so vivid, so deep and sad I guess anyone who has been touched by breast cancer can relate to parts of it:-( A topic close to my heart as my maternal grandmother died from breast cancer aged about 40:-( hugs jan xx
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