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The Piece of Peace

The sky is a mass field of common wealth Air,light and water yields of common wealth Along and across,the lines drawn on the political map Like nerves running over the body Bounding the water resources as mile stones Separated the hearts not the soil Unrest, tearing the unity and peace,piece by piece The idea of inventing bottles Made drinking water a marketing commodity Water is the champion in some own camps Water is a weapon in the agenda of the world war,the last Polluting environment inch by inch Money making minds,burning oil in sleepless nights To discover a vial to make "inhaling fresh air" a commercial commodity There stands greed as a dividing wall of common wealth In between rich and poor Rich is right and poor is left! Up setting the order of common wealth sharing and caring Great not greed,greet not greed,slogan is fake! The spider spins it's own web for it to run Anger,jealous and affection a World Wide Web People unaware the tool of love to cut it to get out Love and affection got out of hearts and hiding in the armpits Where,Where is peace? True,the foundation of commonwealth is strong as the Great Wall "Breaking the Earth of one fourth Bringing people of one third Briefing the heads in good word Business become,commonwealth" This "mantra" is not answering the burning issues If meeting is the answer,that's to meet the peace not people It is a waste of time and money otherwise "It is like going to the toilet, There is a sitting,then there is a report and matter is dropped" A veteran Lankan parliamentarian as revealed Out of fifty three seats of Commonwealth Find the fifty fourth one Let peace sit down on fifty fourth seat Let it the pivot of searching peace Pick up all pieces of peace Past it on the wall of CHOGM It is greater than the Chinese Great Wall,very strong! Resolve,peace! Dissolve finding peace!! (This poem is on the 23rd the CHOGM-Commonwealth Heads of Govt. Meeting- taking place in Sri Lanka from 15th to 17th November 2013)

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Date: 10/26/2014 8:51:00 PM
Muhammad, I find much truth here in your poem. I live on the Great Lakes of Michigan, and I have often marveled at how the water is sold under the people's eyes one bottle at a time. And we do not seem to care, our lakes were at low levels a few years ago and yet no one suspects the little bottles. Other truths abound in your poem but this one struck a chord!
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:57:00 AM
- Here you have many words of truth ! - really well written Muhammad! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 10/26/2014 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit dear poet Andresen.

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