The Picket Fence

The picket fence wore no fresh paint ... but on the ground an old apple core

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2022 12:55:00 PM

... painting a picket fence is a work of patience, Gershon -

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2022 6:40:00 PM

Patience I've got... Just need more buckets of paint...

John Lawless

Date: 12/5/2022 5:14:00 AM

repaint the fence, plant the apple seeds, and wait.....

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2022 6:38:00 PM

It'll be a race: Will the fence dry before the apple seeds become apple trees? It'll be either a photo finish or an oil painting...

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 12/4/2022 11:24:00 PM

The fence can be repainted, but the fruit of that apple will not be replenished. ( I think!!!) A very thought-provoking Haiku, Gershon ( I am still thinking ), lol!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2022 6:35:00 PM

Cogito, ergo sum -- 'I think, therefore, I am,' said the Roman wise men. Personally, I'd leave out the 'therefore.' lol. On a more serious note, I'd amend the saying to 'I thank, therefore I am. Thanks, Shirley! :) gw