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The Physiological Soul Essentials

Your lines so firm and yet so soft My lips so full yet so light Alone in our minds Two lovers find Peace and tranquility Yes I shall take a sip of your worshiped scent Blanket me with your core Your rapture, your before Delighting, inviting, self-assured When two meet Covered, complete Bonded and openly adored A familiar touch and feel Grown together matured and concealed True love knows no measure When chemistry and attraction turns love into treasure

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Date: 12/14/2008 10:50:00 AM

What a positive view on love and commitment! I really like the fifth line. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen

Kimmy Holmes

Date: 12/11/2008 10:34:00 PM

I'm thinkin, you like this guy.... Bet he likes you too. Kimmy

Kimmy Holmes

Date: 12/11/2008 9:28:00 PM

Ummm... I wish I could steal the last line. It's perfect.

John Rhinem

Date: 12/10/2008 11:08:00 AM

Smile~"Very Lovely Dear Laura Mckenzie!"~So much truth within this write dear lady~and it flowed so very well~as if you yourself have found this treasure~ and oh what a treasure it truly is! I loved it! And I am glad that I was able to read it dear lady! "Wonderful Write!"~"Warmth & Blessings To You Always, John!"~"Happy Holidays To You!"~Bye:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/9/2008 3:15:00 PM

It is amazing, isn't it? When two become one, grow familiar and turn their meeting into a treasure. Lovely poem, Laura! ~ Carrie