The Physiological Soul Essentials

Your lines so firm and yet so soft
My lips so full yet so light
Alone in our minds
Two lovers find
Peace and tranquility
Yes I shall take a sip of your worshiped scent
Blanket me with your core
Your rapture, your before
Delighting, inviting, self-assured 
When two meet 
Covered, complete
Bonded and openly adored 
A familiar touch and feel 
Grown together matured and concealed 
True love knows no measure 
When chemistry and attraction turns love into treasure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 14, 2008 at 10:50 AM
What a positive view on love and commitment! I really like the fifth line. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen
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December 11, 2008 at 10:34 PM
I'm thinkin, you like this guy.... Bet he likes you too. Kimmy
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December 11, 2008 at 9:28 PM
Ummm... I wish I could steal the last line. It's perfect.
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December 10, 2008 at 11:08 AM
Smile~"Very Lovely Dear Laura Mckenzie!"~So much truth within this write dear lady~and it flowed so very well~as if you yourself have found this treasure~ and oh what a treasure it truly is! I loved it! And I am glad that I was able to read it dear lady! "Wonderful Write!"~"Warmth & Blessings To You Always, John!"~"Happy Holidays To You!"~Bye:)
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December 9, 2008 at 3:15 PM
It is amazing, isn't it? When two become one, grow familiar and turn their meeting into a treasure. Lovely poem, Laura! ~ Carrie
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