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The Photograph

The wedding photograph took centre stage Eight great years Two years gone now She had sort of moved on Slowly She gazed at the photograph So strange, it looked different It was as if he had taken two steps back from her She began to study the photograph again Maybe it was just that photograph She looked out some others It didn’t make sense He was behind or in the distance Moving out of her life She began to shake It didn’t make sense You can’t change photographs You just can't The family photo He was at the back Was she going crazy She grasped at the wedding photograph Watching as he slowly began to fade from view Was he punishing her Trying to tell her to move on She woke with a jolt Studying the room God, that was awful So awful She needed coffee, and quick The caffeine kicked in She spoke out loud Okay Tom, I finally take the hint Glancing at the photograph So strange she thought She wasn't in it.

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Date: 12/12/2024 7:57:00 AM
This is eerie and intriguing. First the dream of him walking out of the wedding photograph, then awaking to realize she wasn't in it. There is something profound about the relationship drifting.
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Paul Bell
Date: 12/13/2024 9:37:00 AM
Photo's can be weird at times, especially the old ones.
Date: 4/14/2024 10:01:00 AM
What a creative write. Years ago, on vacation I took a picture. When I got home, I found a round white light on it. There was no way that should be on it but it was. Crazy..... Have a wonderful day..................
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/15/2024 11:47:00 AM
Yeah, photos do have a tendency to pick up some unusual things.
Date: 4/2/2024 6:01:00 AM
ooh i like this story poem of yours, would've made a good entry for the twilight zone contest actually, it has that vibe about it..strangely, on one of my wedding photos there was a mysterious shadowy figure standing right behind me...
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/2/2024 8:34:00 AM
Could you imagine if that shadowy figure was someone from your distant past?
Date: 3/31/2024 4:28:00 AM
Very true, you can't change photos, but that moment is always a reminder, of happier days...
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/1/2024 4:25:00 AM
You can only change the concept.

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