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The Petal

I saw a petal Fall from the sky It fell all the way To the ground It swept through the air As swiftly as can be It swooped left and right When near the ground I tried to catch it As I did It fell apart I should have realized That it would Shrivel to nothing Where I stood That is how life is No matter what you do It can't always be saved Like the petal Falling from the sky

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Date: 6/9/2016 10:51:00 PM
Justin, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 8/8/2011 12:15:00 PM
i like this ,sweet observation, a good poem
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