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The Perils Of Staying Power

How’s your finger? 
                            How’s your rib?
These are words I don’t ad lib

How’s your backache? 
                         How’s your knee?
Would you read this, I can’t see

Pass the sugar, no, best not
           Off my meds now, I forgot!

Where’s the salt, oh, yes I know
           Hid it, so it wouldn’t show

I can make it, park the car
     Twenty feet, that’s not too far!

Vitamins?, I just took two!
        Love to eat but I can’t chew

Perils of a ripe old age
     Spiced by memories and sage

None-the-less, I’m here to stay
   Hope at least for one more day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/9/2025 7:27:00 AM
What a fun and true read. Thought old age would be more fun. Have a fun and blessed day writing away...............
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/29/2025 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Paula xxoo
Date: 6/14/2025 3:28:00 PM
thanks for the smiles Mike, happy weekend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/15/2025 4:06:00 AM
Happy Sunday Jan and thank you xxoo
Date: 6/14/2025 5:30:00 AM
Played pickleball for four hours yesterday. My knees are letting me know it today. Nice rhymes Mike
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/14/2025 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Tom!

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