Bukang Liwayway Poet Free verse

The Perfect Woman

A woman may called perfect
                                                 Not on the clothes she collected
                                              Nor a beautiful face she possessed 
                                   And a body to die for but an attitude of an angel
                                         A woman of goodwill and show greatness 
                                         Whom others adorned and to be proud of
                               A perfect woman is a symbol of courage and strength 
                                  It’s how she coped up with all the struggles in life
                             A friend, a sister, and a daughter with imperfect qualities
               But make it perfect by sharing happy moments to the people around her




February 10, 2013

For Pd's Any poem #15
6th Place Winner

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Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2014 at 9:58 AM What a coincidence, I am the lucky guy who got to marry her. Congrats on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 9, 2014 at 9:45 AM A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, maria

Poet Destroyer A April 9, 2014 at 3:42 AM MARIA, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest...:) LINDA

Jack Horne February 14, 2013 at 1:31 PM love this thoughtful write, my friend

Len Gasun February 14, 2013 at 8:03 AM Have a very happy Valentines Day my very dear friend, Maria! I wish you all the love, luck, joy and best of everything today and always! love much, Leonora

Len Gasun February 11, 2013 at 9:06 AM A perfect woman indeed is vividly described in your excellent poem my dearest friend Maria!You're indeed a great poet friend of mine,too I'm always so proud of you. Good luck always and wish you all the best in the contest and in life of course! love and hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2013 at 6:49 AM Just like you, Maria - Well done. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A February 10, 2013 at 11:50 PM hello Maria this is 1 of the best poems I read tonight good luck in the contest take care and have yourself a good night XO XO Linda

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2013 at 11:38 PM a very true one on the perfect woman. You said it beautifully.