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The Perfect Woman

I‘ll never find a perfect woman, Than the one I have. Tranquil my heart all moments, Pompous me real then and next! Kind, patient and supportive, Strong, courageous and classy, I paid a little dowries to have her. Two male goats and a drum of brew She never akin to that lone, But wasn't Lucas’ ever! For the clan and family sought, As appreciation for perfect woman! © Lucas Mkude. 07/02/2013

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Date: 2/9/2013 3:27:00 AM
It's camels and dates here in Arab countries,the dowries I mean.....that was ages back, but I think it still exists in certain clans.... Well done Lucas ,, good luck in the contest..
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Lucas Mkude
Date: 2/9/2013 4:20:00 AM
Oh! very nice Mehnaz.. not very far from us. Thanks for your comments and wishing me luck in the contest friend. Be blessed!
Date: 2/8/2013 5:53:00 PM
true?? It is interesting to learn of the dowries!! Nicely done for the contest.
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Lucas Mkude
Date: 2/9/2013 12:34:00 AM
thanks Andrea this is how the dowries are done here. be blessed
Date: 2/8/2013 5:02:00 PM
I'm glad you found your perfect woman...happiness always
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Lucas Mkude
Date: 2/9/2013 12:37:00 AM
thanks Donna! A perfect woman real brings happiness always.