The Perfect Woman

The woman sat immaculate Fittings from head to toe A beauty that can’t be described Heaven on Earth below She had a smile that can’t be beat Her eyes can hold her man What more could one person attain There is no higher plan If I ever saw this woman I would worship her soul It could be said that she’s perfect Walks on the grassy knoll
Russell Sivey Form of Poulter’s Measure Entrant into Michael Smith's "The Perfect Woman" contest 2/7/2013
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Squyres Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Amazing talent !! Not sure what Poulter's Measure is...hmmm. But I did like the ease of the read as well as the poem. Enjoyed the read !!
Jones Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 5:44 PM
Perfect poem for perfect woman...loved it
Trifiatis Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 2:54 PM
Dear Russell, Hold her picture in your mind for a little while and she will materialize for you to hold her and to adore her beauty! A tender verse, full of images! Loved it! Thank you!
Roberts Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 10:44 PM
Great write Russell ....Seren
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February 7, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Hello Russell, amazing poem and entry. My perfect man would be walk with the same creative description as your perfect women... good luck in the contest..pd
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