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The Perfect Storm

Air perfect substance, high winds are gusting, flashes come in bunches, trees are bustling, thunder like punches, rain pounds and punctures, twister erupting, lawn furniture bumping, hear noisy thumping, houses are busting, street obstruction, ambulance rushing. 1-5-17

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Date: 1/7/2017 1:54:00 PM
Sounds like ever winter in Scottsboro
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/7/2017 6:01:00 PM
One day its 70 degrees and the next its in the 30's!:)
Date: 1/6/2017 8:50:00 AM
A very cool and chaotic image, Cheryl. That kinda commotion will no doubt create the perfect storm of confusion and devastation. Excellent poem, my dear friend. Love and smiles to you.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/6/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness and encouragement Freddie; love & smiles back~Che

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