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The Perfect Storm

Rain bombards the earth Thunder roars with aggression Lightening fills the sky

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/17/2011 11:05:00 AM

Awesome haiku, Des. Very descriptive. Enjoyed. Thanks for your kind comments. Have a great day.. Ralph

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/13/2010 10:35:00 PM

I remember the old days in Zimbabwe during the lightening storms me mum used to cover the mirrors draw the curtains and we used to sit in corridor. Sad hey. Thanks for the memories. Cool write

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/13/2010 2:42:00 PM

Very nie pen picture you have created with fine images, Des

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/13/2010 1:02:00 PM

"The Perfect Storm" was my favorite movie, Des Juan. You have created quite an image here! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/13/2010 12:06:00 PM

This certainly paints a picture..."the God's are angry"...nice...BG