The Perfect Storm

Rain bombards the earth
    Thunder roars with aggression
Lightening fills the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Awesome haiku, Des. Very descriptive. Enjoyed. Thanks for your kind comments. Have a great day.. Ralph
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 10:35 PM
I remember the old days in Zimbabwe during the lightening storms me mum used to cover the mirrors draw the curtains and we used to sit in corridor. Sad hey. Thanks for the memories. Cool write
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 2:42 PM
Very nie pen picture you have created with fine images, Des
Devonshire Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 1:02 PM
"The Perfect Storm" was my favorite movie, Des Juan. You have created quite an image here! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 12:06 PM
This certainly paints a picture..."the God's are angry"...nice...BG
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