Phyllis Babcock Poet Free verse

The Perfect Postcard

The hoar frost coated the trees

Creating a picturesque scene

A wonderful winter land dream

Everything coated in white

An unbelievable sight

An enchanted winter delight

A picture perfect postcard.

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Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2011 at 2:16 PM I just love it when I find one of yours I have not viewed yet! This is really nice to describe a beautiful winter postcard, Phyllis. LEt me check my soupmail to see what you had to tell me.

Brian Strand March 23, 2010 at 4:34 AM Thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian

Mitch White March 22, 2010 at 7:14 AM Nice picture you have painted here Smiles

March 20, 2010 at 8:30 PM Nice use of imagery to paint a picture with words in this one. Fitting title. Keep up the good writing. Karen

John Loving Iii March 19, 2010 at 8:43 AM your rhyming is so much better. i can tell that your learning from me. lol john

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 10, 2010 at 6:36 AM Great imagery in this verse. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Chicken Blogs”. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown March 10, 2010 at 4:57 AM Beautiful Phyllis, I would rather see it on a postcard. We had more then enough this year. Love, Carol

Brian Strand March 9, 2010 at 11:27 PM Thank you for your welcome blog comments Phyllis.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 9, 2010 at 7:57 PM Sounds lovely Phyllis.. beautiful words of description.. thankxxx for sharing and for your special comments on my blog once again.. appreciated..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick March 9, 2010 at 1:44 PM Great write that seems like enchantment..Life is not exactly like that is it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Carrie Richards March 9, 2010 at 1:22 PM I wish you could mail one to me.....it sounds lovely!! ~ Love, Carrie

T.L. Drover March 9, 2010 at 1:14 PM Nice imagery. I have seen many a beautiful morning just as you described it!