The Perfect Panacea

Anxious and stressed and unable to breath
your heart is pumping for the peace that you need
take yourself right away for the whole of the day to a place
of solitude
   of peace 
       and of calm
where you gaze at the birds some so rare and unheard
through a pair of binoculars held in your palm
an owl 
    a falcon
       or maybe a skylark             
the perfect panacea, respite for your heart and mind
your symmetry restored you no longer feel entwined 

written 25th April 2019

HONORABLE MENTION 
Contest APRIL 2019 PREMIER 9,ANY THEME,ANY FORM,UPTO A MAX OF 14 
Sponsor Brian Strand

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Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 4:24 PM
It would be pleasant to do this, but I still prefer unwinding with movies and popcorn. haha. I see you got an HM. Big congrats to you. Your poem evoked much tranquility.
Gilmour Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 3:43 AM
Thank you so much Andrea for your lovely comments and congrats and keep enjoying those movies and popcorn, haha! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sands Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 6:22 PM
This is the perfect way to get away from stress and relax as you describe. So nice ! Congratulations :)
Gilmour Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 3:39 AM
Many thanks Heidi for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 2:33 AM
Congrats on HM. This one is gorgeous,Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 3:38 AM
Thank you so much Caren glad you liked it. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kiser Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 6:23 PM
Oh if everyone would stop and do this once a week...the peace that would fill their souls; well penned. Congrat's on the HM.
Gilmour Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 6:32 PM
That is so true ML there is nothing better than for Mother Nature to calm one's spirit. Many thanks for your lovely comments and congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sergi Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 4:32 PM
Well done, Ann! Speaking as a bird watcher, therein nothing as gratifying as watching various species of birds surrounded by the woods.
Gilmour Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Many thanks for your visit Ralph and your kind comments. It was nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann
Sergi Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 4:32 PM
THERE IS NOTHING....
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April 26, 2019 at 2:55 AM
Panacea, daughter of Asclepius , God of medicine would have aproved of your advice given in this soothing poem dearest, Ann. Good luck my friend! Poetic Hugs xxx
Gilmour Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 6:11 PM
Many thanks dearest Demetrios for your lovely comments and I did not know that Asclepius was the God of Medicine - very interesting, thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Romios Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 5:25 PM
Best of liuck in the Contest. So peaceful! Anne Panagiota
Gilmour Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 7:40 PM
So many thanks Panagiota for your lovely visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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