The Perfect Moment

Church bells echoing in the distance,
welcoming me to the sunny day,
yet, I am falling into enchanted dream
sanctified by my  garden of roses!

Something inside of me
waited the tiny world to unfold itself,
soft rose petals moved slowly by spring breeze
telling me story of graceful contours.

Gentle patterns captured my heart,
sensual play of colors divine,
thorns, signs of upcoming awakening 
did not touch my elated mind!

Melodious whispers, scents, and juices,
charity of Grace reflected,
odd filling of moment entrapped, 
counting seconds of being truly alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/5/2009 2:54:00 PM
Lena, Carrie, John, Nigel, Michael, and Sharon, Thank you guys for your support and warm appreciation…I am especially glad that you enjoy the read! Love, Vesna
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Date: 4/5/2009 12:38:00 PM
Very beautiful poetry! Congrats on your win in Christie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:37:00 PM
Vesna - Congratulations on your H.M. in Christies Contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem and well deserved win in Christie's excellent contest.
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:19:00 AM
Most impressed with this piece, Vesna, especially the final stanza. Congratulations on your win on the Fabulous Fantasy contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:48:00 AM
Hope your fantasy comes true!! Congratulations on this winning poem, and well deserving to be among the winners!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:08:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, a very sweet write. Congratulations on the honorable mention in Christie's contest. Smiles from Lolita
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