The Perfect Man

He stirs magic
in the air I breath.
A smile plays on his face,
and I stand there,
starstruck.
The light of his halo
renders me helpless
and I surrender to him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 10, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Samantha Dexter, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~
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May 8, 2016 at 2:54 AM
SAMANTHA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
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February 11, 2010 at 3:49 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Samantha. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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February 10, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie.. if only we all could find that perfect man... great and imaginative..
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