The Perfect Guy

The Perfect Guy
Every girl fantasizes about what the perfect guy would be like
would it be like the movie enchanting
or would it be like a Cinderella story
as a child you would dream about this
you was the one always saying
that's going to happen to me one day
but as you got older
you eventually experienced your first heart break
so you knew it wasn't true
you thought he was perfect
he was special
he was the one
everything was good at first
until you had that first argument
you thought it would be the first and last one
but it wasn't
now you found yourself crying more and more
so you ended it
because it wasn't suppose to be like that
the perfect guy wont hurt you
he"ll hate to see so much as you crying
he can tell whats wrong with you
just by looking at you
he doesn't like to be away from you
your always on his mind
the perfect guy knows every little detail about you
and he still cares
he loves you for who you are
he loves your personality
he loves your smile
he loves the way you laugh
he loves the little things you do to put a smile on his face
he loves to hear you talk
he wants to hear your voice
he knows all the right things to say
he tells you that your the most beautiful girl that he has ever seen
but ti him its not always about the looks
its whats in the heart that matters
he loves you because his heart tells him so
he loves you because its something about you
that he has never felt before
he loves you because your the one he feel in love with
the perfect guy will always be there
no matter what
the perfect guy could be standing right in front of you
but your to blind to see it
he could even be your best friend
but no that's wrong
that will ruin your friendship
but why?
he knows everything about you
you can tell him anything
you love to be around him
he is what i described as perfect
have you not caught on yet
once in your lifetime you have thought about this
you and your best friend
yea that's funny
that's a good joke
but its true
you may say there is nothing more to us
were just friends
are you sure?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 7/9/2013 12:47:00 PM
Very Deep Latianna, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:45:00 AM
If boys & girls (since a real man & woman wouldn't act this way) would stop looking for love wearing fantasy eyelids, love & relationships would make so much more sense. This was an enjoyable piece to read, Latianna.
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:45:00 AM
Good morning Latianna...I'm just getting out of a relationship..this makes perfect sense..an excellent write. very expressive!! enjoyed..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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