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The Perfect Guy

The Perfect Guy Every girl fantasizes about what the perfect guy would be like would it be like the movie enchanting or would it be like a Cinderella story as a child you would dream about this you was the one always saying that's going to happen to me one day but as you got older you eventually experienced your first heart break so you knew it wasn't true you thought he was perfect he was special he was the one everything was good at first until you had that first argument you thought it would be the first and last one but it wasn't now you found yourself crying more and more so you ended it because it wasn't suppose to be like that the perfect guy wont hurt you he"ll hate to see so much as you crying he can tell whats wrong with you just by looking at you he doesn't like to be away from you your always on his mind the perfect guy knows every little detail about you and he still cares he loves you for who you are he loves your personality he loves your smile he loves the way you laugh he loves the little things you do to put a smile on his face he loves to hear you talk he wants to hear your voice he knows all the right things to say he tells you that your the most beautiful girl that he has ever seen but ti him its not always about the looks its whats in the heart that matters he loves you because his heart tells him so he loves you because its something about you that he has never felt before he loves you because your the one he feel in love with the perfect guy will always be there no matter what the perfect guy could be standing right in front of you but your to blind to see it he could even be your best friend but no that's wrong that will ruin your friendship but why? he knows everything about you you can tell him anything you love to be around him he is what i described as perfect have you not caught on yet once in your lifetime you have thought about this you and your best friend yea that's funny that's a good joke but its true you may say there is nothing more to us were just friends are you sure?

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Date: 7/9/2013 12:47:00 PM
Very Deep Latianna, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:45:00 AM
If boys & girls (since a real man & woman wouldn't act this way) would stop looking for love wearing fantasy eyelids, love & relationships would make so much more sense. This was an enjoyable piece to read, Latianna.
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:45:00 AM
Good morning Latianna...I'm just getting out of a relationship..this makes perfect sense..an excellent write. very expressive!! enjoyed..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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