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The Perfect Friend

The Perfect Friend © Today I found a friend Who knew everything I felt She knew my weakness And the problems I’ve been dealt. She understood my wonders And listened to my dreams, She listened to how I felt about life and love And knew what it all means. Not once did she interrupt me Or tell me I was wrong She understood what I was going through And promised she'd stay long. I reached out to this friend, To show her that I care To pull her close and let her know How much I need her there. I went to hold her hand To pull her a bit nearer And I realized this perfect friend I found Was nothing but a mirror Written by Shannen Wrass Copyright © 1995 Shannen Wrass. All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 9/20/2018 4:08:00 PM
Shannen, excellent poem! I am a songwriter. Do you mind if I use "The Perfect Friend" for a song?
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Date: 11/7/2016 5:08:00 PM
Lovely poem. The ending was sublime, which made me read from the top all over again. Nice work.
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:20:00 AM
Love your poem. Nice message, perfect ending!
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:46:00 PM
Shannen, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:36:00 AM
The ending literally gave me chills. Wonderful!
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Date: 8/29/2013 10:58:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Shannen ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:47:00 AM
Awesome ending. That said, sometimes the only friend you do have, is yourself. But, being good to yourself will allow you to be good to others, which will test those who will treat you the same. "Do unto others", as it's said...excellent writing!
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:41:00 AM
Good morning Shannen, ~Wow! I believe I am my own best & worst friend.. love the write, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend ~LINDA
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