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The Perfect Day

It was New Years' Day and the rain was pouring. The plans I made for were ruined by the rain. He must have noticed I was cold because I felt his silky leather jacket being draped across my bare shoulders. I looked over and saw him smiling at me. I caught myself blushing then looked away. Shyly I broke the silence. "I'm really sorry. I had this big day planned for us but," I paused, "I forgot to check the weather." Before I could continue blaming myself his finger tips led my face perfect plush lips. When we kissed, it was like Heaven on Earth. He told me something I'll never forget. Kneeling down on one knee, he looked up and grabbed my hand. The words still play like a song in my head. "Will you marry me?" Tears poured down my face. I was so excited the words got stuck in my throat. So I nodded instead. He picked me up, spun me around, then we kissed. There was so much passion we felt the sparks between our closed lips. This was truly the perfect day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/4/2013 12:17:00 AM
"tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:51:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/12/2013 5:01:00 AM
Thank you Mario.
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Date: 6/12/2013 4:57:00 AM
Love fixes everything, even a rainy day. Best wishes!
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