Mulu Magdalinos Poet Free verse

The Pebble

                          The Pebble
                    The green pebble dances
                       In a wild sea
                        The superb moonbeam mirrors
                               My ragged soul 
                            The silent brook caresses             
                                A night flower
                     
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Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2024 at 12:38 PM by the way, this one has excellent imagery.

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2024 at 12:37 PM well, I've seen at least three poems for today. I am starting at the bottom and working my way up. This one is nearly error free, but since you used periods in the last two sentences, you should also change comma to period in line 3. If I help revise longer poems, I will do it in Soupmail. Mulu Magdalinos February 27, 2024 at 3:44 PM Thank you very much , my dear friend . Andrea Blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu December 19, 2022 at 3:13 PM Hello Mulu, This is a lovely poem. I read it twice. Enjoy your evening my friend. Merry /Christmas.Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu December 20, 2022 at 11:04 AM Hello Mulu, You are welcome. Thank you. Blessings to you. Mulu. Mulu Magdalinos December 19, 2022 at 8:45 PM Hello Darlene,thank you for the lovely comment.Be blessed Darlene!!