Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

The Pearly Gates Keeper

Conversed today with my ninety-two-year-old sister
Now that's longevity, perhaps I should whisper
Case the gatekeeper's asleep
The great benefits she'd reap
Or maybe the gatekeeper could be into the liquor

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Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2020 at 9:31 AM Always whisper when near to your sister, As the gatekeeper’s a real mean creeper. He pretends to sleep, Is nowt but a sneak, Waiting to drink all your sister’s liquor... Cheers to your sister! Jack Ellison November 3, 2020 at 10:19 AM WOW! A beautiful tribute to my sister dear Belle!!! Another limerick to save and admire! Love your limerick brother! XOX

Tom Cunningham November 3, 2020 at 8:53 AM Wow, what a great age, I wish her many more happy years. Jack Ellison November 3, 2020 at 9:27 AM Imagine walking the golf course so long into their 80s had a lot to do with their longevity!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 3, 2020 at 5:43 AM Ooh! Lemme knows I know what to bring! ;D, Jack Ellison November 3, 2020 at 5:52 AM She was still playing golf with her ninety-five year old hubby until he passed away earlier this year! HOLY CRAP! Lovesies, HJ XOX