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The Pearl

Sea waters bathe the shore time and again with the tide bringing with it demolished particles what once were the walls of a child's sandcastle now awashed across my ceiling and floor needing true grit to withstand at times as each grain forever becomes a part of me for better or for worse Round and round as the days and waves roll on in an effort to invade my shell the incessant currents push and pull that gurgle of unstable bubbles drowning out my daydream their outcome yet to be determined for reasons I cannot fathom Peering out from the smallest opening keeping my shell closed as tight as possible bracing myself for better or for worse as the seas shall trespass once more all the while I am forming round and round still becoming me...

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Date: 2/4/2022 7:12:00 PM
Loved the imagery! Loved the concept as well. Take care.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/17/2023 4:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, Valerie... You take care, too :)
Date: 12/18/2019 3:51:00 PM
Congrats to your winning poem Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/10/2020 5:26:00 PM
Thank you NA NA... I appreciate your kind congrats :)
Date: 12/18/2019 1:57:00 PM
Kelly, back to say congrats for your win in Brian's contest. Hugs, John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/10/2020 5:21:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by once again John :) Hugs!
Date: 9/3/2019 6:11:00 PM
Hello Kelly Deschler, I love this beautiful poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/12/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 8/22/2019 11:49:00 AM
A beautiful pearl in the making, I can't wait to see the finished product. A lovely write, Kelly, congrats on your win. John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/12/2019 1:08:00 PM
Thank you very much John ... I appreciate your kind congrats and comments on this poem :)
Date: 8/19/2019 4:02:00 PM
ohh wow, kelly... your lyrical sensitivity is worthy of a great win... Congrats and tight huggs!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/15/2019 5:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind congrats and comments on this poem Nette :) Big hugs :)
Date: 8/18/2019 3:49:00 AM
It is a pleasure reading this poem for the second time this morning, Kelly. To me it is both personification and metaphor. Belated congratulations on your worthy win! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/15/2019 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Paul ... I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment so kindly on this poem :)
Date: 8/16/2019 3:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/14/2019 8:08:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind congrats Anne-Lise ... Hugs :)
Date: 8/15/2019 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/14/2019 8:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats Jeanne :)
Date: 8/15/2019 9:53:00 PM
Beautiful Personification ,Kelly, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/14/2019 7:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind congrats and comments on this poem Eve :)
Date: 8/15/2019 4:10:00 PM
Kelly, Kelly, I absolutely love your beautiful pearl as you have formed it with your creative expression! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving podium silver win! : ) xxoo
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/13/2019 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind congrats and comments on this poem Connie :)

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