The Pearl

Sea waters bathe the shore
time and again with the tide
bringing with it
demolished particles
what once were the walls
of a child's sandcastle
now awashed
across my ceiling and floor
needing true grit
to withstand at times
as each grain
forever becomes a part of me
for better or for worse

Round and round
as the days and waves roll on
in an effort
to invade my shell
the incessant currents
push and pull
that gurgle of unstable bubbles
drowning out my daydream
their outcome
yet to be determined
for reasons I cannot fathom

Peering out
from the smallest opening
keeping my shell closed
as tight as possible
bracing myself
for better or for worse
as the seas shall
trespass once more
all the while I am forming
round and round
still becoming me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Staton Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:12 PM
Loved the imagery! Loved the concept as well. Take care.
Deschler Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 4:33 PM
Thank you so much for reading... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, Valerie... You take care, too :)
Na Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Congrats to your winning poem Kelly
Deschler Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:26 PM
Thank you NA NA... I appreciate your kind congrats :)
Gondolf Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Kelly, back to say congrats for your win in Brian's contest. Hugs, John
Deschler Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Thank you for stopping by once again John :) Hugs!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 6:11 PM
Hello Kelly Deschler, I love this beautiful poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Deschler Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Thank you so much Darlene... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Gondolf Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 11:49 AM
A beautiful pearl in the making, I can't wait to see the finished product. A lovely write, Kelly, congrats on your win. John
Deschler Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Thank you very much John ... I appreciate your kind congrats and comments on this poem :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 4:02 PM
ohh wow, kelly... your lyrical sensitivity is worthy of a great win... Congrats and tight huggs!
Deschler Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Thank you so much for your kind congrats and comments on this poem Nette :) Big hugs :)
Callus Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 3:49 AM
It is a pleasure reading this poem for the second time this morning, Kelly. To me it is both personification and metaphor. Belated congratulations on your worthy win! ~ Warm regards // paul
Deschler Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Thank you Paul ... I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment so kindly on this poem :)
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 3:04 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind congrats Anne-Lise ... Hugs :)
Mcgee Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 11:54 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
Deschler Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 8:00 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats Jeanne :)
Roper Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Beautiful Personification ,Kelly, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
Deschler Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:59 PM
Thank you so much for your kind congrats and comments on this poem Eve :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Kelly, Kelly, I absolutely love your beautiful pearl as you have formed it with your creative expression! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving podium silver win! : ) xxoo
Deschler Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind congrats and comments on this poem Connie :)
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