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The Peace of Ignorance

Tumor’s ripe in the barren field of her brain. Hearing that the doctor has fixed her day, they dart to her hut. Before the eyes that do stare, her wrinkled body’s frozen. ‘Maximum six months’, the doctor says. Scissors cannot play on her. Help’s less and hope’s less. Six ,seven, eight …months die on the walls, and are reborn. Still, her heat ticks like a clock. She grasps it and gets up with her tumor like a rock. She is born new like a phoenix under the peace of ignorance. Fabiyas M V

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/3/2012 5:20:00 PM
Hmm...is there more to say Fabiyas..?
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Date: 10/3/2011 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:37:00 PM
It's a great pleasure to read this poem of you Fabiyas.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Fabiyas
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:34:00 AM
Wow, Fabiyas, if you only knew how much this relates to my life right now. I LOVE this poem and the uplifting ending. Congratulations on your great win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:00:00 AM
Hi, your poem has peaked my interest, are you suggesting that people with cancer should not be told? Just wondering or does this poem mean something entirely different. I love a poem that makes me think. Lee
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Date: 9/30/2011 8:37:00 PM
I read this about fourteen times, 'cause it just grabbed me. The meaning I got from it is there's a fine line between being among the living dead and the dead living. Is that what you had in mind? Thanks for the fine write and for supporting my contest, Fabiyas. Beauty day, Namaste~N
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:55:00 AM
Another excellent writing!
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Date: 7/17/2011 7:11:00 PM
Sad tale beautifully told, Fabiyas
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:13:00 AM
oh,..this poem is so amazing...well-penned...I'm from Batangas,Philippines...how about you? smile...*-*junjun
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Date: 7/13/2011 9:53:00 PM
wow, this is very interesting. She survived long after? It seems to be written about something true you heard about??
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:39:00 AM
sometimes it pays not to know... a well-rendered piece with great flow, fabiyas..:) huggs,nette
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Date: 7/13/2011 6:16:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Fabiyas. I have enjoyed reading your fascinating writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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