The Pause

Stone covered with moss
Motionless in stream moaning
So wind dries the tree
The birds seek green from sky still
Haunted by rocks of dead stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 30, 2012 at 1:48 PM
A clever tanka. Bravo. I've posted The Trek on my blog vcobor.blogspot.gr (I publish both Greek and English poems there). You can send me some of your poems via my email given on that site
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