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The Patio

I sit and sip my cold iced tea;
And watch the ships go out to sea.
On the patio blooms crowd me,
While I'm lost in sweet memory.

In shafts of sunshine of my mind,
Go dancers of the phantom kind,
For now and then the past rewinds,
Much too precious to leave behind!

Sunset like one golden cherry,
And sea birds fly about carefree,
Salty breezes pass frequently,
And night comes slow and tenderly.


Written on July 15, 2020
For Strand Completely New (10) Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 7:38 PM
A lovely lay poem of the sights and sensations of the sea as viewed from your flowered patio. Congratulations on your top win, Evelyn, I enjoyed reading this today ~ John
Buehler Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 8:05 PM
I appreciate your warm comment more than words can say. So glad you enjoyed this verse. My very best wishes, Evelyn :)
Brul Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Just wonderful, dear Evelyn! Simply amazing! Congratulations on your TOP WIN!!
Buehler Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Thank you for your kind words, my friend. hugs, Evelyn
Wolf Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 10:26 PM
Completely new and LOVELY. Straight into my FAVES, Evelyn. This is some gorgeous penning, my friend. Bravo, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Thank you, Gershon. Your words mean so much. I'm so happy to have this poem in your FAVES. Best of wishes. :=)
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