The Patient Persuit of Pleasure (Round Four)

Not Yet! Not Yet! No, Not Yet! Wait for me!
Wait! I see that you are ready to blow,
But we must wait for this feeling to grow!
Wait for it, while you and me become we!
Wait! Wait! Not Yet! You will see! You will see!
Hold it! Hold it! Hold it! Do not let go
Until I get there! I will let you know!
Just wait! Soon, we will set each other free!
I just want to show you how much I care!
We can make it last! Let me show you how!
Wait! This is something that we need to share!
Almost! Almost ready to take a bow!
I am almost there! I am almost there!
Just one more minute! One more second! NOW!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hales Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Great stuff you ... not sure if i can beat that one .... sarah x
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June 21, 2010 at 12:09 PM
soupmail in a moment
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June 21, 2010 at 12:01 PM
hey Dakarai I am posting poems right now. Do not forget to read the one slam on Amy,,and thanks 4 your comments. I will come back and see how you and SARAH"S rounds are going..I heard you are done,,p.d.
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