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the pathless path

truth we would find, although we’re blind looking outward, without insight we light a spark, to gain clear sight although we’re blind, truth we would find we slow down thought, to be self-taught to gain clear sight, we light a spark soul ascends on an upward arc to be self-taught, we slow down thought love’s benign burn, the way we learn an upward arc, soul ascends on faith ushers dawn, love’s our crayon the way we learn, love’s benign burn by day and night, heightens delight love’s our crayon; faith ushers dawn the cloak we don, God’s light at dawn heightens delight, by day and night our aura shines, love for love pines God’s light at dawn, the cloak we don fear-fetters sawn, we smile and yawn love for love pines, our aura shines

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Date: 7/7/2025 8:33:00 PM
I think that the repetition of phrases really hammers home your message, Seeker. Wonderful, Gershon
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Date: 7/7/2025 8:51:00 PM
Thank you, gw, swap quatrains have that benefit

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