The Path To the House

The path is narrow 
the roots of the trees 
jut out of the ground 
offering a risk 
of stumbling 
or falling. 

I feel excited 
adventurous 
where does this path lead? 


The sky is bluey purple 
the clouds are few 
I can see the beautiful sunset 
above the roof 
of the trees 

The roots 
in the ground 
that once stuck out 
are no longer 
on the path 
behind me 
all around me 
I feel 
exhilarated 
almost one 
with nature 

The key I find there 
along my way is black 
rusting 
I can picture it 
opening a metal gate 
I hold the key 
in my hand 
close my eyes 
and smile 
as I put it in my pocket 

The chalice is covered in jewels 
perhaps once filled 
with the waters of life 
the shiny metal glistens 
off of the sun 
I like this cup 
very much 
and like the key I found on my path 
somewhere in the forest 
I take it with me 

Along my way 
I come across a lake 
the calm lake looks inviting 
the ripple waters 
show me the mirror 
of the mountains 
and trees 
all around me 
I take my shoes off 
and stick them in 
The water is cool 
refreshing 
I take my shirt off 
soak it in the water 
put my shirt back on 
and go on 
my way 

The cottage at the end of the path 
through the forest 
by the lake 
is very old 
I use the black rusty key 
and open the door 
I call out 
as I walk in the house 
I look through the things in the house 
leaving everything as it is 
and leave 
as quietly 
as I came in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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