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The path to enlightenment

I see him calmly gliding.
My eyes follow him down the stream.
I absorb his peaceful wisdom.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 4:44 PM
oooo...I just like this one.
Gauthier Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 3:00 AM
Thanks, Sara ~
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