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The Path Downhill II

The night was still She took the path downhill. Without a will Without a spill She took a pill. The night was still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 6/18/2016 5:55:00 AM
We read and feel still for a while ...
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Julia Ho
Date: 6/18/2016 6:07:00 AM
Thank you for commenting. Glad that it evoked such an emotion within you.