Poetically Numb Poet Rhyme

The Path

Which path to choose, the question at hand,
So hard to make a choice.
Roaming blind through trechorous land,
Seeking my inner voice.

The voice inside me so haunting,
So faint I cannot hear,
Not giving the answer I'm wanting,
Waking my deepest fear. 

The fear it burns so very deep,
Not sure if I can cope.
Into God's arms I take a leap
Returning to me all hope. 

With hope so strong, I'm finally free
Can't lead this heart astray,
The path I choose is up to me,
With His guidance all the way.

6/29/2017

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Silent One July 15, 2017 at 4:21 PM Now this is a great thyme poem, it really flows very well..

Chris Green July 11, 2017 at 1:04 PM This was really nice, great flow, very melodic and the rhymes were flawless. The message will touch many.

Pat Adams July 5, 2017 at 7:31 PM I really like this. Perfect rhyme all the time. Great job! (Cool name as well) looking forward to your next write.........Roger 80] Poetically Numb July 7, 2017 at 12:23 AM Thank you for taking the timw to view and comment! So glad you enjoyed it :)

Winged Warrior July 4, 2017 at 6:23 PM Congrats!!! on your win my friend...I bow to your verse...welcome to the Soup Bowl...god bless...^WW^ Poetically Numb July 5, 2017 at 1:46 PM Thank you so much. It's an honor to place, let alone come in a winners position, being amongst such wonderful artists... God bless

White Wolf July 4, 2017 at 2:42 AM Yay, Alexis! Congrats to you on your winning poem! So good having fresh great new talent on the site! Best of luck in your future endeavors! Poetically Numb July 4, 2017 at 12:41 PM Thank you so much!! I'm so excited and honored people are recognizing my words. It's all from the heart. Feels great, thank you yay!!

Gregory Richard Barden July 3, 2017 at 4:50 PM Amen! We must keep moving forward in Faith, and use the Word to assuage our fears ... we shall be quenched! This is wonderful - enjoyed it very much, Alexis! :-) Poetically Numb July 4, 2017 at 12:42 PM Trying to find him more and more everyday. Thank you for your kind words. God bless!

Janice Canerdy July 3, 2017 at 4:23 PM That's right. The BEST freedom is that granted by God. Congrats on your win. Janice

Alyssa Lorette June 30, 2017 at 12:58 PM Great poem, Alexis! May God guide you into a beautiful path! :) Poetically Numb June 30, 2017 at 4:09 PM Thank you Alyssa! And you as well :)

Daniel Turner June 29, 2017 at 7:50 PM Can't go wrong with God leading the way:) Nice write, Alexis:) Poetically Numb June 29, 2017 at 8:17 PM You're so right Daniel :) hasn't steered me wrong yet! Thanks for the view and comment :)

Jeremy Smith June 29, 2017 at 6:37 PM Great rhyme ;) God will always lead us in the right direction!! Poetically Numb June 29, 2017 at 7:48 PM Lead me to you :)