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The Path

Which path to choose, the question at hand, So hard to make a choice. Roaming blind through trechorous land, Seeking my inner voice. The voice inside me so haunting, So faint I cannot hear, Not giving the answer I'm wanting, Waking my deepest fear. The fear it burns so very deep, Not sure if I can cope. Into God's arms I take a leap Returning to me all hope. With hope so strong, I'm finally free Can't lead this heart astray, The path I choose is up to me, With His guidance all the way. 6/29/2017

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Date: 7/15/2017 4:21:00 PM
Now this is a great thyme poem, it really flows very well..
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Date: 7/11/2017 1:04:00 PM
This was really nice, great flow, very melodic and the rhymes were flawless. The message will touch many.
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Date: 7/5/2017 7:31:00 PM
I really like this. Perfect rhyme all the time. Great job! (Cool name as well) looking forward to your next write.........Roger 80]
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Date: 7/7/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thank you for taking the timw to view and comment! So glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 7/4/2017 6:23:00 PM
Congrats!!! on your win my friend...I bow to your verse...welcome to the Soup Bowl...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/5/2017 1:46:00 PM
Thank you so much. It's an honor to place, let alone come in a winners position, being amongst such wonderful artists... God bless
Date: 7/4/2017 2:42:00 AM
Yay, Alexis! Congrats to you on your winning poem! So good having fresh great new talent on the site! Best of luck in your future endeavors!
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Date: 7/4/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thank you so much!! I'm so excited and honored people are recognizing my words. It's all from the heart. Feels great, thank you yay!!
Date: 7/3/2017 4:50:00 PM
Amen! We must keep moving forward in Faith, and use the Word to assuage our fears ... we shall be quenched! This is wonderful - enjoyed it very much, Alexis! :-)
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Date: 7/4/2017 12:42:00 PM
Trying to find him more and more everyday. Thank you for your kind words. God bless!
Date: 7/3/2017 4:23:00 PM
That's right. The BEST freedom is that granted by God. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 6/30/2017 12:58:00 PM
Great poem, Alexis! May God guide you into a beautiful path! :)
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Date: 6/30/2017 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Alyssa! And you as well :)
Date: 6/29/2017 7:50:00 PM
Can't go wrong with God leading the way:) Nice write, Alexis:)
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:17:00 PM
You're so right Daniel :) hasn't steered me wrong yet! Thanks for the view and comment :)
Date: 6/29/2017 6:37:00 PM
Great rhyme ;) God will always lead us in the right direction!!
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Date: 6/29/2017 7:48:00 PM
Lead me to you :)

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